“We are a world divided, with skeletons filling the cracks.” Evelyn Moore hasn’t seen her children since the day they were born. No one in Felicity has. From the moment a child is brought into the world they are placed into the arms of a patrol, and sent to live on the other side of… [Read More]
Thank you! Yes, this is the opener. I have not outlined yet – I’m more of a pantser when it comes to writing – but you’re right, it might be a good idea to try to at least plot a little bit ahead of time.
Looking for a bit of feedback on how well the story is working so far. Going out of my comfort zone by making more of a psychological thriller, and by writing in third person.
Within Her Mind (working title)
“Do you believe you are a danger to yourself or others?”
Avery Denton stared at the spot directly above Dr. Hoffman’s head, where the f…