• Laura Roberts added a new Work in Progress 4 years ago

    CHAPTER 1

    “Bonjour, hello,” says the border guard, dressed in a tight-fitting navy blue uniform. He stands next to the car where Ryan and Jackie Murphy sit, neither quite sure how to proceed. They’ve never been […]

    • Nicely written, Laura. You draw the reader in right away and make him/her want to know what’s going to happen next. What is going to happen next? Do you see this as erotica/romance? How far along are you?

    • Great opening. Just a thought – wouldn’t they want to go for two days?